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Trees will block out the Light
A mighty Storm will scatter Stone
Five fall to Four and One falls to flight
A kit finds it's mother to take up the fight
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Darksong- Deputy « Thread Started on Dec 14, 2008, 5:36pm »
Name: Darksong Age: 36 Gender: Tom Clan: RainClan Position: Deputy
Description: Darksong is a short haired cat with off white fur. His eyes are quite peculiarly colored. His left eye is blue and his right eye is amber. Darksong has one brown paw, his back left paw. His nose is a very light pink, which stands out on his off white fur. Another peculiar thing about Darksong is that his eyes are quite round and large.
Description Summary: Darksong is a medium, shorthaired, off white cat with one amber eye and one blue eye.
Personality: Darksong is a strict but kind tom. He does not have a short temper, as many toms do. Don't let this fool you though, for he is quite masculine. Darksong is muscular and knows it. He takes any chance he can get to show off. Even though he is a show off, that does not distract him from his duties. Darksong has no fatherly knowledge whatsoever. Often when he trains his apprentice, he gets a little too rough. Another thing about this tom is that (even though he is kind) he does not like complaining. Not at all. That is one of the very few things that sets him over the edge.
History: Darksong's mother was a rogue. When he was born, his mother gave him the name Darkkit because he was mischevious. After a few moons (three to be exact), Darkkit's mother abandoned him. Darkkit had to spend his first night on his own in the safety of an abandoned rabbit hole. Coming out at dawn the next morning, Darkkit ran into a RainClan patrol. He told the patrol his name and they took him in. After three moons, Darkkit was apprenticed to the Deputy, Angelheart and named Darkpaw. After many moons of training, the Darkpaw was given his Warrior name, Darksong. Once he had his Warrior name, he was named the new Deputy, for the other one had died tragically of greencough. During his silent vigil, Darksong was attacked by an owl. The owl gave Darksong a pretty bad cut between his ears, but Darksong still managed to scare off the owl. Once morning came, Darksong had his wound treated and started his Deputy duties.
RP Example: Darkpaw walked silently and forlornly over to the Medicine Cat's den. His mentor and best friend, Angelheart had become infected with greencough. Walking over to Shadowfur, Darkpaw raised his head so he would appear braver than he felt. Shadowfur nodded his head silently, answering Darkpaw's unspoken question, and allowing him to go and see her. Padding over to her nest, Darkpaw layed down beside the sleeping Angelheart and put his head on his front paws. The white apprentice layed, unmoving for what seemed like hours, days, moons until he knew he had to leave. Meowing a silent goodbye, Darkpaw left. As he walked over to the fresh kill pile, he realized he wasn't hungry, so he started toward the apprentice's den. Laying down silently on his bed of moss, he fell into a dreamless slumber. "Darkpaw, wake up." a familiar voice meowed hushedly but frantic. "Angelheart has died." At that moment, his eyes jerked wide open and everything about him went numb. Getting to his feet he walked, tail and head hung low, over to Angelhearts motionless body. As he let out a loud yowl of sorrow, he shared tongues with her for the last time. After a short time, Cherrystar called the Clan to attention. "Since our beloved friend and Deputy is now making her journey to StarClan, I must appoint a new Deputy. I know it pais us all, but it has to be done. Darkpaw, from now on you shall be known as Darksong." Darksong met her eyes and nodded silently, showing respect and then went on to serve his vigil. After about half the night had passed, Darksong began to hear flapping noises. Looking around, he saw nothing. The noises started going away, but then got louder. When he looked up, an owl came down and scratched his head between his ears. Trying hard not to yowl, Darksong reached up and clawed at the owl, sending him in the opposite direction. Finally morning came. Walking over to the Medicine Cat den, he got some cobweb put on the scratch. Feeling tired, Darksong went to the Warrior den, found a nest, and went to sleep.
FIFTEEN MOONS LATER: Darksong looked proudly down at his ex-apprentice, Smalltail. He had trained her for fourteen moons. Yes, it took a little longer than usual, but it was worth it. She was a smart cat. As he remnisced, he remembered their first training session. Smalltail had been shy but eager to learn. She was kind of slow (physically), but picked up quick. After about three moons, she caught greencough. She was out for one moon, but survived the infection with no ill-effects. Now he looked proudly down at her as she got her Warrior name. "And now, as you know our Deputy has died, so I must name a new one. Darksong, you have showed with Smalltail that you are capable and willing to work. You are RainClan's new Deputy!" Bowing his head in respect, he shone like a star, remembering his teaching from Angelheart.
Re: Darksong- Deputy « Reply #1 on Dec 14, 2008, 5:47pm »
You need to change the fact that he was made a warrior and deputy on the same night, that would never happen because he would have needed to have at least one apprentice before being made deputy. Other than that, it looks good.